Here is my 100 WC for this week. I was working on orgonising my ideas into paragraphs.
It was pitch black, the moon was my only light as I walk into the deep dark forest. I see a red flame in the distance, I walk towards it but it vanished.
I kept walking hoping I would find the group, I hear a cracking sound and look behind me. There is is the red flame I start walking towards it but it leaves again.
I hear the group talkig in a distance, I start running towards them and see the light again and seen the flame. As the flame flickered and then it went out.
“Your back Katie!”
Hi Katie,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your piece of writing this morning. I think you did a good job of achieving your learning goal. You have used some precise vocabulary to communicate meaning.