Here is my 100 WC for this week.
It was a beautiful night to go for a wander, Skai stepped outside to feel the warm breeze blowing in her face! She sees a light in the distance and her curiosity starts growing.
As she walks deeper into the night it starts to fog, she gets scared so pulls out her flashlight... But it's flat, she sees the light again and it has grown bigger just as much as her curiosity has.
She finally finds the Bamboo Forest with the glistening and glowing leafs, she catches one and hold it as it warms her up. She is happy!
Here is a pic of the prompt.
What a wonderful piece of writing. I loved the way the story flowed in a seamless manner. I also loved the description of the 'glistening and glowing' leaves. Do you imagine what Skai may do beyond this? I look forward to your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Katie,
ReplyDeleteI love when you say ‘as she walks deeper into the night’ as soon as I read it, I don’t want to look away! NO improvement needed!
Hello Katie
ReplyDeleteI like to fist bit when it said It was a beautiful night to go for a wander, Skai stepped outside to feel the warm breeze blowing in her face! She sees a light in the distance and her curiosity starts growing. that bit made me read all of it I gave you A+ good work.
Kind regards
Andrew from Awahono School