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Friday, May 13, 2016

Katie's 100WC

Here is our weekly writing competition - the 100WC! I need to work on my puncutation and my paragraphing so I look forard to  improving these each week. Enjoy!

There is was an infinaty of white marbel stairs, so I thought. I started walking I looked up just to see a spec of white. I kept walking until I came to a feild of clouds. 

A feild of clouds that I thought I would fall through, I stepped on the feild just to find that I fell through like I thought. But I fell to the middle of stairway to the Sky but how?

I kept walkng for about forever, I had finally reached to top! I was so excited! I was over the moon... Litteraly and it was amazing I could see everything from here!

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